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    [N/A]Why Is It So Wrong To Love?

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    LauzieeLoo
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    [N/A]Why Is It So Wrong To Love?

    Post by LauzieeLoo on Thu Apr 14, 2011 12:55 am

    Usually I write these sorts of things on the spot but I got alot of positive feedback when I posted this on another forum so I thought I might post it again. I vent through poetry. Just saying. Enjoy?

    You discriminate, discriminate,
    You expect love yet you're filled with hate.
    You wonder why we're in this state?
    You claim you're good and that this is our fate!

    You say that if it's love, then you won't mind,
    About their skin color, or their bodies' kind.
    But for us it's different, I'm now to find.
    If it's another girl, love will never be blind.

    You're cruel, so cruel, you knock us down.
    You still wonder why we cringe and frown.
    What was once crystal clear is now murky brown.
    Why do you laugh like I'm a clown?

    I've run, I've hidden, cowered in fright.
    You haters attacked, now it's my turn to fight.
    I'll kick and scream with all my might.
    You imbeciles don't see the light!

    To learn you're different in a ''wrong'' way,
    To have a mother's warm hug turn cold and grey,
    To have no-one hear what you have to say,
    I don't understand why it's so wrong to be gay.

    You say God loves every soul that thrives,
    But use that same man above to ruin our lives.
    You're behind the scars from razors and knives,
    We're the sinners while divorce still survives!

    Divorce, not a sin, it's okay, Divorce.
    Missusing God's blessing with not a bit of remorse.
    Continuing on as though it's part of your course,
    Didn't you just tell us his word's a living source?

    So maybe I've sinned, and I'm no longer respected.
    I've been moulded and changed, then left and rejected.
    But when you sin with divorce that's what's expected!
    And yet you can still be world-wide completely accepted.

    Why is it so wrong to love?


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    Re: [N/A]Why Is It So Wrong To Love?

    Post by bluesky on Fri May 13, 2011 8:20 pm

    hey me had read it
    and i love it
    its almost describe what i feel and the reaction of the human being
    yup y is it so wrong to love
    kindly keep up the good work and share it with us


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    Re: [N/A]Why Is It So Wrong To Love?

    Post by december12 on Tue May 31, 2011 3:19 am

    Wah.......so beautiful . Who say poems are boring ? Not for this one.
    I fall into a melody while reading this; I don't know why . Maybe cuz it's rhythm .
    Well, you're very good that you can write in perfect rhythm. Exclamation
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    Re: [N/A]Why Is It So Wrong To Love?

    Post by LauzieeLoo on Tue May 31, 2011 7:14 am

    Waw! Thankyou guys ahh your comments make me so happy seriously it makes me so happy when someone comments on my poetry thankyou so much <3
    I'll write more soon Smile


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    Re: [N/A]Why Is It So Wrong To Love?

    Post by JaDe&AmBeR4eVeR on Wed Jun 22, 2011 7:15 am

    oh gosh, unnie, you are SO deep (in the good way) your work is so beautifully in depth, its just so beautiful. i love the way you see the world...your work is gorgeous, just gorgeous.
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    Re: [N/A]Why Is It So Wrong To Love?

    Post by december12 on Thu Jun 23, 2011 4:32 am

    LauzieeLoo wrote:Waw! Thankyou guys ahh your comments make me so happy seriously it makes me so happy when someone comments on my poetry thankyou so much <3
    I'll write more soon Smile

    Haha , I think everyone is like you - happy when see comments over your hard works . Me too . Ya know first time I wrote my very first fic and no one comment , I was so sad that I almost give up . It's when I remember Shocked , I used to read many stories with no comments for the author . So that's when I realised how it feels to see just only one comment . Very Happy
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    Re: [N/A]Why Is It So Wrong To Love?

    Post by JaDe&AmBeR4eVeR on Thu Jun 23, 2011 7:59 am

    exactly, unnie deserved all these comments because she (and her work) is amazing!!! we need a grammy award over here or something, hahaha

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